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19 March 2011 @ 10:35 pm
Between 4th and 5th Floor - jongyu - oneshot  
Title: Between 4th and 5th Floor
Author: eunki & chunonew_rx (@onchunnie_rx )
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Focus: jongyu
Summary: Jonghyun is in a hurry to do his next delivery and gets trapped in a elevator a claustrophobic person. What else could go wrong?

A/N: this is our first collab fic. I started the idea and he worked the magic. XD

Between 4th and 5th Floor


The elevator opens at thirteenth floor and a man got in.

And when the doors were about to close that man heard someone from outside yelling “wait for me!”

So as a good person he was he pressed the Open doors button

And when the guy entered, he said “oh god, thanks, I’m kinda late for my next delivery and these things are too slow in this building, waiting for another one would mean that I’m fired from work.” He said and smiled brightly to the other man and continued “by the way I’m Jonghyun”.

The other man didn’t say anything but give Jonghyun a small smile like saying ok whatever just stay away from me.

The one called Jonghyun tried again “are you dumb? Or you are just trying to ignore me?”

The other guy again didn’t respond and placed himself as far away as possible from Jonghyun as saying don’t talk to me, and just fucking wait till the elevator reach the main floor

“Ok then I will take that as a yes, you are dumb.” Said Jonghyun a bit annoyed.

He don’t like when people ignores him. He sometimes gets that he is too talkative and may scare people away but hey he wasn’t killing anyone in that elevator so why couldn’t he get a simple response from the other.

But then suddenly the elevator stopped, he looked up at the screen and saw it says they were in between 4th and 5th floor. The alarm started flashing.

“Oh please don’t fucking kidding me” he said full of frustration “I’m going to get fired”

The other person didn’t say a word again. He just put an angsty face that Jonghyun couldn’t read well. The guy still stayed in silence but Jonghyun could see that his hands started trembling.

“Oh no!, don’t tell me you are one of those people that has fear of closed spaces. What is that called? Was it homophobia?.... oh right that’s for umhh other things hehe anyways wa---” he was cut off by the other man.

“It’s called Claustrophobia, you stupid.”

“Hey I’m not stupid. You are the stupid one that pretends to be dumb.”

“Can’t you just shut up? Damn it! Why are you so fucking annoying? Find something better to do.” said the man pointing at the buttons board. While he got down on the floor and sat there making sure he was as far as possible from Jonghyun. He was somehow glad that they were the only ones in the elevator; more people could mean more agony.

“I’m not annoying I’m just trying to make a conversation here, you are the weird one. And what?. You want me to find help?” said Jonghyun and the man just nodded.

They then stayed in silence while Jonghyun pressed the emergency button. But no one responded to his call. He tried twice and thrice but no answer. He checked his phone and it has no signal. Stupid network company, why I haven’t changed from it before? He thought.

He looked at the man in the other corner of the elevator. The man was now in the floor with his knees on his chest, his arms on them and his face hidden in his hands, his body totally trembling.

“No one is answering. Do you have a mobile that we can use here?” Jonghyun asked and the guy didn’t looked up at him but said “it’s in my briefcase”

Jonghyun got surprised at the change to tone in the other’s voice and he was about to make a comment but refrained himself, like his best friend Key said: he sometimes needed to stay quiet and that time seemed that it was totally the time.

He was about to go near the other person but the other repeated with fear and nervousness in his voice “it’s in my briefcase”. He walked through the elevator, took the briefcase and was about to sit down beside the other one when the other said “don’t sit near me” still his hands on his face.

“What damn is your problem? You let me take your briefcase like we know each other and then you go back to your stay-away-from-me attitude. Are you crazy or something?”

The man didn’t respond again. Jonghyun was getting used to that attitude.

“Whatever” he said and looked inside the briefcase looking for the phone. There were a lot of papers, papers with lots of words of business and numbers and vocabulary that Jonghyun wasn’t really used to. And in a small corner was a name Lee Jinki.

“So your name is Lee Jinki?” Jonghyun asked the other without realizing it.

And the other one named Jinki for the first time looked up. It was a desperate look, he was suffering a lot and Jonghyun didn’t have an idea of it. His breath started cutting as he was getting dizzy and he didn’t know what to do.

So he said “Look. Just take me out of here. I will give you a new job. I will pay for your delivery, whatever you want, but just take me out of here.” He said before putting his face on his hands again.

Jonghyun this time got scared. This Jinki guy was looking pale each time and it’s going worse. So he tried to calm down, to talk less and think how to make the other feel better before they got out of there.

He then first dialed the information section of the building and there was no any answer. So he tried again with the elevator emergency button and thankfully this time he got an answer. He talked with some officials downstairs and he thought things could get well.
He then sat down in the other side of the elevator facing the trembling guy.

“They said they will take us out of here as soon as possible.” Jonghyun tried to calm Jinki down. But instead he was getting more nervous by himself. He didn’t know how to work with this kind of situation.

Jinki who was pale became paler and paler. Jonghyun can only open his eyes wide. Jinki’s face was still hidden on his hands but it’s pretty obvious that his skin is abnormally white. If Jonghyun didn’t know he could have mistaken Jinki to be a corpse. The trembling of his body is becoming more and more obvious. Tiny whimpers started to be audible as Jinki tried to fight the terror within him.

Jonghyun on the other was alarmed on how the other is behaving so he used Jinki’s phone again to dial. This time he called his friend Key to ask him how to handle a claustrophobic person trapped in an elevator. Fortunately, Key is just too almighty that he was able to answer all the question of his trapped friend and Jonghyun tried to memorize every detail that his friend told him.

While Jonghyun was ending the call, all he was able to do was to almost stick on the wall and climbed off of the elevator with widened eyes as Jinki suddenly jumped off his place and screamed loudly as much as he could in horror. Jinki cannot understand but it felt like he is being drowned but there is no water. He just wanted to go out of that place as fast as he could. He started to panic like it’s the end of the world. He was already pushing, punching, banging, and slapping the steel walls of the elevator as he groaned and moaned and screamed even louder.

Jonghyun tried to stop the now being wild Jinki but he was just pushed harshly on the other side of the lift. “Please stop! You are shaking the whole thing. It’s becoming more dangerous if you continue being wild!” The delivery boy shouted.

It somewhat stopped Jinki but he is still groaning in terror in one corner with his teary eyes. Then, Jonghyun remembered what Key had told him a while ago.

He went to the scared Jinki who wanted to stop him. “Don’t go near me!” The older warned him but it seemed like Jonghyun didn’t hear him. Jinki’s eyes just got even wider as Jonghyun is getting near to him.

Jonghyun held both Jinki’s shoulder and pulled him to the middle. “Don’t stay at the side.” The younger started to explain “It will make it feel wider if you stay here at the center.” Jinki stiffen with the sudden contact with him.

Jinki tensed even more when Jonghyun started to unbutton his coat and took it from him. “What are you doing?” he asked in a very suspicious voice but the delivery boy in front of him ignored him. Jonghyun started to unbutton the polo of Jinki when the elder suddenly held his hand to stop him. “Don’t worry, I will not rape you.” Jonghyun said as he gently removed Jinki’s hand from his. “I will just unbutton the first three buttons to help you relax. This will make feel less enclosed.” Jinki was just so surprised with the action of Jonghyun towards him. He acted very snob just a while a go and here is this boy still trying to help him despite of everything.

“Wah! It is really difficult to be homophobic.” The younger said as he returned to his early spot in one of the corners and sat on the floor, “I mean, claustrophobic” as he smiled and scratched the back of his head.

But then, there is still no difference in Jinki’s expression. He is still in terror as his body continued on trembling, stiff but trembling. Again, Jonghyun doesn’t know what to do. He just prayed that he will not reach the point where he has to do the last but not the least suggestion of Key if the standing at the middle of the lift and unbuttoning the polo is not going to work. It should work and it should not fail because I can’t do the last recourse Key told me. Jonghyun said to himself.

Yes, he can’t do it but what else would he do if the stiff but trembling Jinki in front of him is becoming more terrorized and is almost on his way to paranoia and loosing his mind. He is almost becoming freaking hysterical at the middle of the elevator. He started to whimper like a small child and Jonghyun just wanted him to relax because being crazy like that who cannot control his emotions is just the perfectly imperfect thing to do at the moment. It is just adding insult to the already worse scenario.

“Oh my god…Oh my god” Jinki panicked synchronized with Jonghyun who is also trembling on his own feet because he doesn’t know what to do.

“Oh your god…oh your god” Jonghyun was just so out of his mind as he saw the ever so panicking Jinki continuously and the red light keep flashing on spontaneously. “What should I do?” he said repeatedly on his mind. “I can’t do it.” He said when he remembered what Key had told him to do.

I guess I have no choice! Jonghyun told himself. He cleared his throat which Jinki heard despite of his panic state.

“Are you going to say something?” Jinki said in a high pitch voice. “Can you please do something? I’m going to die here soon because of nervous breakdown.” He cried louder in the middle of that elevator.

“I guess this will make you better but I don’t know what will happen to me after this.” Jonghyun said more to himself but still, Jinki’s sharp ears didn’t let it pass.

“What is it that you are talking about. Who, what, when, where, how? Come on, just help me.” Jinki is just going to lose his mind any moment from now.

His eyes just widened and it totally changed everything. He can feel his body still tensed but not trembling anymore. He just can’t believe it. It felt like he is not in elevator anymore. It seems like he is somewhere else. His eyes started to close until it was tightly shut as he felt Jonghyun’s lips brushed against his. The delivery boy cut it shortly and whispered “Don’t be tensed. Loosen up a bit so that you will be relaxed.” The kiss continued and the two are really feeling it. They have completely forgotten about the elevator. Tongues started to play with each other until it became a fight for dominance. No one wants to be inferior. Tongue pushing the other and vice versa. Jonghyun got carried away with the sensation that they are both experiencing as he had pushed Jinki on the wall and grabbed the collar of Jinki to lower him more. Soon, it was Jinki leading. He had locked Jonghyun’s hands above his head on the wall as he had reached the delivery boy’s jaw line. Jonghyun was panting and Jinki was running after his breath but they are still continuing. He has to make sure that Jinki will be distracted from the fact that they are still trapped inside that elevator or else he will go panic again and paranoid which will just shaken up the whole place.

“OH….MY….GHAD!” Key screamed as the elevator opened when he saw what his friend and that unknown stranger were doing. Thank God nobody was around except him. They have completely forgotten where they were and that they haven’t felt that the elevator had started functioning again.

The two slightly pushed each other away when they heard Key and both cleared their throat as they removed the imaginary dusts off their clothes.

“Thank you very much for the help.” Was all Jinki can manage to say as he bowed. He picked up his briefcase and coat and then went out of the elevator.

When Jonghyun went out “Key, just wait for me here” as he run after the other. “Mr. Lee, wait.” Jinki stopped and looked back at him.

“Oh, here’s my calling card.” Jinki handed him a piece of paper from the inside pocket of his coat and smiled sweetly. His eyes disappeared with that and Jonghyun thought What a wonderful scenery. That was the first time he saw Jinki smile and he really looks cute. “If you are free or maybe fired, please feel free to contact me. I don’t know how to repay you.” With that Jonghyun handed him also his number and smiled back. He then went back to Key in the opposite direction.

“What do you think you were doing inside the elevator huh?” Key asked in still surprised manner.

“Kissing that man.” Jonghyun answered simply as they are going down the stairs.

“And why? You said that you were trapped in an elevator with a claustrophobic person.” Key can’t just get over it.

“I am trapped with a claustrophobic person and that was him. You told me that if standing in the middle of the elevator ad loosening up the clothes will not help then I’ll just kiss the person so that he will temporarily be out of reality and felt relaxed. I just followed your advice.” Jonghyun retorted.

“That’s not what I meant. I thought you were with a girl. You never told me that you were with a male stranger.” Key can only massage his temple “I made my friend into something…somebody help me.”

Jonghyun then received a message on his phone…

“Nice meeting and being trapped with you in the elevator. Thank you.” And he replied

Same to you. See you next time, maybe in the elevator……………again. ;D

our first collab ....from lots more to come
we really hope you like it ^_^

comments are love <3

mood: cheerfulcheerful
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roxa: onew beannie<3chunonew_rx on March 20th, 2011 07:09 pm (UTC)
thanks for reading and loving this XD ^^
tutubi22btutubi22b on March 20th, 2011 03:49 am (UTC)
Oh ho ho!~ ♥


(>_> makes me wish I was trapped in there too, rofl)
roxa: dubupotterchunonew_rx on March 20th, 2011 07:11 pm (UTC)
ho ho XDD i'm glad you liked this
we all wish to be there too hahaha
thanks for reading ^^
Fannybunnies_09 on March 20th, 2011 10:07 am (UTC)
LOL *rolling off my bed*
jonghyun's just so askhmgdtpf so talkative! (lol at how he always mistook saying claustrophobic as homophobic)
And jinki's just so cute being scared like that!
Cute fic!
Share more XD
roxa: flawless onewchunonew_rx on March 20th, 2011 07:13 pm (UTC)
haha i'm glad you liked this
jjong is just a dork XDD
thanks for reading ^^ <3
Blingbling_blueeunki on March 21st, 2011 04:55 am (UTC)
I have also to thank you for reading and commenting.

I'm glad that you like this and expect more fics from us.
We will do better. <3<3<3
wicked l'il flamevolatileflame on March 20th, 2011 07:39 pm (UTC)
aww~ <3
roxa: cuttie jjongchunonew_rx on March 20th, 2011 09:56 pm (UTC)
thanks for reading ^^
Blingbling_blueeunki on March 21st, 2011 04:56 am (UTC)
I'll just say thank you in General to all people who have read this and those who are yet to read this. Thank you so much. :DDD

밥라브라: 『종현 - 배꼽』n_k_zanzibar on March 24th, 2011 10:29 pm (UTC)
OMG THIS! I DON'T EVEN! I loved this so hard it was just.....
Soon, it was Jinki leading. And everything that follows that sentence is pure HOT!
Except for Key walking in of course

Sigh~ if only Key had waited a little longer to interrupt them, then maybe he could have walked into a scene that left him speechless! xD
roxa: bad jjongchunonew_rx on March 25th, 2011 12:46 am (UTC)
hahahaha thanks for reading but mostly for commenting XDDDD
blame my co-writer for that hotness LOL
don't cry key~~~ XD
i'm sure we are glad you liked it =)
Jishu: Tiffanyjishu on June 20th, 2011 04:09 pm (UTC)
Fun elevator experience!!! <333
roxa: chun-beisballwannabe XDchunonew_rx on June 20th, 2011 04:55 pm (UTC)
XDD really fun lol
thanks for reading ^^